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Jul 08, 2008
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Him & Whispering Wind.
Him & Whispering Wind
Listen to the whispering wind
it may have a message for you
send your thoughts soaring along
they may find solace for you.
It is not entirely dark
some light still left over there
seek what you might be seeking
it may be there for you.
Stop worrying for him
he is the master of his own destiny
heed the warning of the wind
it will be good for you.
He left you on your own
and turned back on his word
may be in his denial
lay the truth for you.
You can see the look on his face
bewildered, confused and desperate
if you know the real state of his mind
that may be enough for you.
Wish him the best and
pray for him through your soul
may be in his salvation
that door will open for you.
By:-
Rahbar.
Comments
prayersbyPatty
17 years 10 months ago
Nice Poem
rahbar
17 years 10 months ago
An encouraging comment.
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
I’m sorry but the subject
rahbar
17 years 10 months ago
Honest comment.
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Rahbar
rahbar
17 years 10 months ago
sincere suggestion.
amalzamani
17 years 10 months ago
For You
rahbar
17 years 10 months ago
Reply to your comment on "Him & Whispering Wind."
themoonman
17 years 10 months ago
Rahbar...
rahbar
17 years 10 months ago
Perfect approach.
zarul
17 years 10 months ago
NICE POEM