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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jul 04, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

She Surfs The Moment

Under blue ocean waters
she rides the ripple
takes a gulp of air
and the sea adorns her beauty.

From beneath clashing waves,
she moves smoothly
the light gain access
exposing wet auburn skin.

— Barbara Writes, Jul 04, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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themoonman

themoonman

18 years ago

Hi Barbara...

I saw that girl at Garden City...lol nice pictures here the gain needs an s I like them short and wet..er I mean sweet.. Richard
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years ago

Thanks Richard

Smiles:) Barbara i thought i replied to your comment. sorry it got overlooked. thanks for commenting and the suggestions they are much appreciated thank also for noticing the picture i tried to paint here.
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poewriter58

18 years ago

barbara

I love the entire imagery of this poem, my only regret is that it is not longer keep this one going in that style nice work Chrystalie
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years ago

Thanks Leonard

Smiles:) Barbara thanks Leonard i worked days on this trying to paint a specific picture, thanks for seeing it. it wasn't easy.

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