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leonard daranjo
Jul 07, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Appointment

Death permits us to enjoy the lullBy keeping from us its secretOur appointment is writtenDown in its diaryOn the fateful dayIt  will take usDown that darkLonelyRoad

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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Leonard

may I suggest that rather than using allows, use permits just a thought :-) short but very much to the point. Chrystalie
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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Chrys

I agree with you. "Permits" is indeed a better word. It carries the meaning I intended. Thanks for the suggestion. Take care ... Leonard
Mark

Mark

17 years 10 months ago

Well built and starts off nice

I tend to agree with Chrys. On the poetry I have a bit of trouble with the last 4 lines. In our lives it is a darkness a question an unknown but there is a presumption here that in reality it is as well - we don't know, really. Some say their truth and others say theirs and you are saying what I think most would. This poem is intriguing. Death is in man lol Mark
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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Mark

Actually I was thinking about the "darkness" part while writing it. Some people who have had a near death experience claim that they saw a bright light. I suppose one can never know until one gets there. Cheers ... Leonard
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Synchro

17 years 10 months ago

However I see that road

as not lonely at all, but the prelude to a new adventure! No, I don't think I am "going to heaven." I'm already there. However, I know that all life--the one we know, and the one that awaits us, is simply a process of change, and the transitional change that we on this side call "death" is only a death of the material body, a very small part of us. Be of good cheer, Leonard. It's all worth having. Yours in peace, (Cynthia McKinney for president) Synchro
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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

THE FACE OF MATTER SHALL REFLECT THE SPIRIT - Aurobindo

Synchro, Thanks for this . These are my thoughts too. Difficult to imagine how a life can be completely extinguished. Sri Aurobindo says that the process of evolution hasn't ended. It continues - in the conscious sphere; every rebirth is a purification leading ultimately to liberation - what the Buddhists call nirvana. So death is nothing but the closing of one door and the opening of another. Cheers ... Leonard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Great Nonet Leonard. The

Great Nonet Leonard. The question is do we leave alone? Love. Peace. ~Anna
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Appointment

Leonard great Nonet here, and food for thought. You did a great job ~
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Leonard

I can say from personal experience that what happened to me was everything got dark except for one spot, like looking down a paper towel tube. It was spooky as the voices around me started fading into the distance. They were there , but far away. Anyway, The poem was excellent. I thought you captured it extremely well. Rett: The perfect summer day is when the sun is shining, the wind is blowing, the birds are singing and the lawnmower is broken. "James Dent"
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Perhaps we die little deaths

Perhaps we die little deaths along the way...surrendering who we think we are. A little reborn... ~Anna