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Today's Puzzle ~ Why Is Bukowski Praying For Rain?

Where words go to die
the gist of all things unfurls
wings, ties rocks to clouds

~~~~~~~~

Silence
reverberates
in a pristine heart,
a motionless heartbeat
away
from all that
water,
falling
from
one breath
in a river
of dreams.

~~~~~~~

I heard Bukowski praying for rain today
while fucking the last redhead on earth,
a thirsty creature by an ancient
waterhole,
ears perked,
nostrils flaring --
that almighty
anticipation of
impending death..

we are but
interlopers here
crazed sharks, insatiable ghosts
word-vultures
in bedrooms
of Poets
yearning to make it
through all that
fire.



— Kailashana, Jul 02, 2008

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Anna...

why he is praying for more redheads of course... enjoy your writing.... Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

lol. Well… of

lol. Well... of course...but then the Great Bukowski was a stickler for honest-to-God's truth... Thanks Richard... I like to bring a little joy whenever & wherever I can. Mostly there's too little of it to go around. Hugs, Anna
R

Rolwright

17 years 11 months ago

Wow

My first true love was a redhead damn you hit so close to the heart it's like Wow are you sure you never met me before.Coincidence makes sence but wow your so close I feel I've at one time touched your soul. Peace and Love Rolwright
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

I’ve been getting the

I've been getting the feeling lately that I know you under another identity. You wouldn't be masquerading as Rolwright, now would you? I always wanted to be a redhead with green eyes. Stood in the wrong line. Now I'm old and grey. lol. Hugs, Anna