Eternal Lover

Beautiful eroticism that makes absolute sense, along with a celebration of the virtues of adoration. I guess I've given up my fight for punctuation, and this one works without it, I'll admit (though I always prefer it) but I do insist that you need an apostrophe for "moment's." :-) Yours in peace, (Cynthia McKinney for president) Synchro

Saturday night? LOL! Nice, Mark

eroticism brought to life in this write Lacy.. And one that I can relate to very well... Absolutely beautiful from beginning to end.. bruise and even bleed for a moment's taste of need.. Powerful words my friend.. well written and expressed.. BrownEyesBlue

very sexy ! all right I'm going back for another read... yep.. still sexy.. Richard

Wow the flow is fabulous, all the way through, so well written, graphic and yet simply painted in a neat column yet captivating the reader through from start to finish with the beautiful and moving graphic descriptives which sculpt so well this wonderful masterpiece of poetic art. So much said too and I bet you set those sheets on fire with passion! Great bewitching and enchanting read. Well done, hope you are in print, you sure should be. Bravo, love it! Poetic Hugs, Kaz. Kazytc XX

but this is damn near perfect. Incedibly difficult to wtite eroticism without being tawdry. I salute you. cheers, Jess

You gotta have wrote this seconds after awakening from a wet dream!lolcheers.from a jock who loves a joke!great write

Hi Lacy This is exquisite and could relate to this beautiful moment which stays with you. very moving. electric blue you new buddy thank you for your comments on Wine of desire and others of my poems electricblue

during one of my stays in the Psych I read all the books and finally got to the romantics fantasies about women Heroinnes My god what had i missed growing up !! So much on male Atwood writes well Loved your poem very much Shed lots of light for me and was very sensous and Erotic and a non Neon way

This is lovely, truly! Thanks for taking me with you on this sensual journey. It is so nice to see you posting/writing again! Glad you are back. Always, Cat

Bravo!and this poem is a top liner.very nice use of words.class with a capital.cheers and i will follow you from now on.all the best fay scotland.

This is an awesome write, Hot, lol, enjoyed it . Lyz