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Three Haiku

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Walking in spring rain,
grass captures impressions of
my bare feet in green

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Floating cottonwood
layers everything in silk
a summer's white-wash

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Soap bubbles drifting
among children's clapping hands
dodging extinction


— Janice Pearce, Jun 30, 2008

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prayersbyPatty

17 years 11 months ago

Janice what can I say

Wow, I love this. Meadows, soap bubbles fighting extinction..... you are extraordinary Patty
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

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Patty I am glad you liked these thanks so much for your high compliments!~
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

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Barbara, thanks for stopping by to read, glad you liked them~
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

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Anna, thank you for your encouragement and thoughtful words I appreciate them!
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

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Thanks Ronda, If it wasn't for you, I'd be a syllable short! LOL
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

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Catalina, I so appreciate your feedback, always!
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Janice...

you went and done it again! I liked them all... but that last one is my favorite.. clapping hands chasing bubbles... now that is getting the image down on paper.. well done! Richard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

Richard

I always look forward to your feedback~Thank You for your comments!
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

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Leonard you are too kind, but I like your comments thanks~
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DarkinAZ

17 years 11 months ago

Pretty sweet...

visuals credited to this write. Thank you, Mark
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 11 months ago

You REALLY...

...."out-did" yerself. Where do you find the time to write, AND post comments? OH, oh...you have "Feline Imps", don't cha? SSssooooooooo sorry, to hear that....they can keep you up, LATE ! ...I know. I have 'em, TOO ! #:>) *docmaverick.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

LOL

Thanks for taking the time to read this, and your kind words I appreciate them!
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zarul

17 years 11 months ago

REALLLLLLLLY NICE

ITS REALLY NICE POEM DROP BY AND READ MY POEM K IT MAY BE IT IS NOT AS GOOD AS YOURS, BUT DO DROP BY
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

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zarul, thank you for commenting, and your kind words. Will stop by and read yours~