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Jun 30, 2008
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The Promenade ~ If You Come With Me.
If you come with me
just this once,
if you leave that café
by the Seine,
the thinning air
of tender flesh,
I will bow
low like a thirsty fog
in cupping hands
we'll open our graves
and let time pass away
like a poem
of fallen leaves
opaline
sparks of fire,
two pillows stitched with
our Samurai and Geisha
lives,
smoke-blue feathers
of a double Heron moon,
a scent of orange blossoms
slow....
....easy...
footsteps.
— Kailashana, Jun 30, 2008
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Rolwright
18 years ago
That's Deep
Kailashana
18 years ago
What book is that Rolwright?
themoonman
18 years ago
well now...
Kailashana
18 years ago
Hi Richard, and you’re
Kailashana
18 years ago
Many years ago I had an
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