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Out of Body Experience

My seeking spirit
unfleshes it’s body
and spreads
it’s wings of fire,
for your bright blue soul
lies with me
on our wave carved
island rock.

Anticipation
of  the
jagged fingered
storm
floods the moment
of our joining
beneath the blood-torn sky.
Electric needles
shiver touch
my arching skin…
sculpted by
breath-soft caresses
of loving hands.

The hardness
of abrasive rock
beneath my back…
racked withthe pounding rhythm
of overwhelming ecstasy…
the waves pouring
 and breaking
over our flash-tongued,
writhing bodies…
embracing…suffusing
our torrented flesh
with white plumed,
foaming breakers...
mixing withthe fragrant sap
of our loving.

The seas boiling,
the skies toiling
spilling forth
their storm,
in whose eyethe cold chill
of physical absencetransforms...
 distilled intoembodied heat
and incandescent,
 searing passion

Then thunder roars
like a thousand lions
as lightning
splits my thighs
and fated bed
of unyielding stone.
A white surge of energy
…so pure…so bright…
flows through,
between,
inside
and beyond.....

With love,
fused as one…
immuted
our souls become.

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years 10 months ago

Lacy...

This piece is absolutely breathtaking!!! I wouldn't change a word of it. Always, Cat
C

cricket

17 years 10 months ago

Lacy

wow.. absolutely beautiful... imagery and word usuage is excellent.. well written.. BrownEyesBlue
C

Calliope

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you

For me those waves are powerful indeed, as is the storm that rages and roars Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

Lacy

Congrats on spotlight. This is one stunning piece! For some reason had the image of two dragons. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine!"
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Lacy

I'm sweating to the rhythm of the pounding waves of passion.. Whew! well done. I think Jess had one too many beers if she's seeing dragons! *wink* Rett: The perfect summer day is when the sun is shining, the wind is blowing, the birds are singing and the lawnmower is broken. "James Dent"
C

Calliope

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you all.

This vision is a meeting place between two souls.One in which will never be forgotten. Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
S

Synchro

17 years 10 months ago

It occurs to me

that this is a near perfect equivalence of satori...and sexual fulfillment...both of which are vastly underrated, and both of which result in an insight which few attain. As you may know, I identify with both, and am deeply appreciative of this reminder that we share the binding of this truly earth-shaking climax....no less for its transience, as for its eternity. I am overcome, both sexually and spiritually, and that is a combination rare in insight. How delightful that you share it. Yours in peace, (Cynthia McKinney for president) Synchro
C

Calliope

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you

High praise indeed. Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.