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Jul 02, 2008
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Out of Body Experience
My seeking spirit
unfleshes it’s body
and spreads
it’s wings of fire,
for your bright blue soul
lies with me
on our wave carved
island rock.
Anticipation
of the
jagged fingered
storm
floods the moment
of our joining
beneath the blood-torn sky.
Electric needles
shiver touch
my arching skin…
sculpted by
breath-soft caresses
of loving hands.
The hardness
of abrasive rock
beneath my back…
racked withthe pounding rhythm
of overwhelming ecstasy…
the waves pouring
and breaking
over our flash-tongued,
writhing bodies…
embracing…suffusing
our torrented flesh
with white plumed,
foaming breakers...
mixing withthe fragrant sap
of our loving.
The seas boiling,
the skies toiling
spilling forth
their storm,
in whose eyethe cold chill
of physical absencetransforms...
distilled intoembodied heat
and incandescent,
searing passion
Then thunder roars
like a thousand lions
as lightning
splits my thighs
and fated bed
of unyielding stone.
A white surge of energy
…so pure…so bright…
flows through,
between,
inside
and beyond.....
With love,
fused as one…
immuted
our souls become.
unfleshes it’s body
and spreads
it’s wings of fire,
for your bright blue soul
lies with me
on our wave carved
island rock.
Anticipation
of the
jagged fingered
storm
floods the moment
of our joining
beneath the blood-torn sky.
Electric needles
shiver touch
my arching skin…
sculpted by
breath-soft caresses
of loving hands.
The hardness
of abrasive rock
beneath my back…
racked withthe pounding rhythm
of overwhelming ecstasy…
the waves pouring
and breaking
over our flash-tongued,
writhing bodies…
embracing…suffusing
our torrented flesh
with white plumed,
foaming breakers...
mixing withthe fragrant sap
of our loving.
The seas boiling,
the skies toiling
spilling forth
their storm,
in whose eyethe cold chill
of physical absencetransforms...
distilled intoembodied heat
and incandescent,
searing passion
Then thunder roars
like a thousand lions
as lightning
splits my thighs
and fated bed
of unyielding stone.
A white surge of energy
…so pure…so bright…
flows through,
between,
inside
and beyond.....
With love,
fused as one…
immuted
our souls become.
Comments
Candlewitch
17 years 10 months ago
Lacy...
cricket
17 years 10 months ago
Lacy
Calliope
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you both.
leonard daranjo
17 years 10 months ago
Then thunder roars like a thousand lions
Calliope
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you
Mark
17 years 10 months ago
Holy cow Lacy
infinite_dwarf
17 years 10 months ago
Lacy
Rett
17 years 10 months ago
Lacy
Calliope
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you all.
Synchro
17 years 10 months ago
It occurs to me
Calliope
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you