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Jun 28, 2008
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My Take on Fate's Straight Traits
There are many qualities
that make us all, unique;
like everyone's faces,
or each one's physique.
Some people are very strong,
others, quite weak;
and we all hail from different places.
We also share similarities,
making us seem the same.
We may share the same birthday,
or even a name;
prefer the same music,
or a picture in a frame.
Or, we each may achieve things in a similar way.
Traits can cause the appearance of, ugly,
I tend to celebrate, beautiful.
The traits I mention in this verse,
are all the traits, wonderful;
and this piece is to honor,
the one's that make people's lives full;
and those that make us better people, when times are worse.
that make us all, unique;
like everyone's faces,
or each one's physique.
Some people are very strong,
others, quite weak;
and we all hail from different places.
We also share similarities,
making us seem the same.
We may share the same birthday,
or even a name;
prefer the same music,
or a picture in a frame.
Or, we each may achieve things in a similar way.
Traits can cause the appearance of, ugly,
I tend to celebrate, beautiful.
The traits I mention in this verse,
are all the traits, wonderful;
and this piece is to honor,
the one's that make people's lives full;
and those that make us better people, when times are worse.
— docmaverick, Jun 28, 2008
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