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Experimentalism

I had to taste the ink to find out
if those words were true or not
I had to chew the paper
to understand what the ground would feel like

My bones were broken by the burden
like a sphere with skyscrapers of stone,
with emotions like boiling water
and hearts’ words like quakes

When I lifted my knees from the peat bog
of judgments,
I knew I was lost in the chaos of night
from the past

My neuronal creek was filled with beasts
with three heads, each one with snakes upon
My desires were their wings with photon feathers
tinted in red and green and blue

Every inch of my skin was stabbed
with light spears
Within my white bloody wounds,
electrons flee

From one point, the growth of the Universe
taught me all these

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Marius

Smiles:) Barbara Words like quakes or "that quakes" not sure what you mean here This is awesome. All the body components use in such a poetic way is intriguing.
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Barbara!I wanted to say

Hi Barbara! I wanted to say "quakes" as similar with "earthquakes"; words like quakes meaning strong words with a deep meaning! Than you very much! Best wishes, Marius! Sorry for the late response but I will have a very busy mounth and I am not home in Romania, but in another country, so the internet connections are hard to find.