Anger - unrestrained beast

This is excellent. What a visual your words produce. I see nothing to correct or add. It is perfect the way it is Chrystalie

Very good description of anger here Marius~

Smiles:) Barbara I like how you describe anger here. The first two lines reminded me of an angry woman. Then your chest bark at the moon change that flow to you being the one angry, then the beast is born and slashes you, bring me back to the beginning. The ending was vague to me at first, then it came after reading again now I see a calmer you like the one in these ware wolf movies after a kill. Not saying this is a woman or you, but saying it is the anger you describe. All in all it is a great piece. I am not suggesting any changes this is just what I discern from it.

That's some funky imagery right there, bro. Nice work. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine!"

sounds bottled up, release it man, release.... Much better to let it out. Great imagery, I agree. Sincerely, Mark

The inner beast, or demon is so hard to contain. Great imagery! Always, Cat

Smiles:) Barbara

i loved how u decribe anger

Very very good. Great imagery is evoked by comparing anger to the beast inside. Very astute. Sometimes the beast within gets free much to our regret. Great write. Rett: The perfect summer day is when the sun is shining, the wind is blowing, the birds are singing and the lawnmower is broken. "James Dent"

another triumph cheers, Jess