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Mirrored In The Moment

i on the beach
little crabs play hide and seek
with the sea ii Parrot bright downy feathers
aerodynamic body
freshly painted beak iii frisky bright eyed crowawaits hospitalityon my window sill iv  standing on the beach
the sand gets sucked away
from under ones feet v the sea kissed the clouds
an impressionist’s brush
smudged the horizon vi  soot on moist hands
the dark night painted itself
on my window pane vii heralding thunder
silver streaks of lightening
splinter inky skies viii lightening glimmers
rapid eye movement
on stormy evenings

 

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Ahhh… Excellent Leonard.

Ahhh... Excellent Leonard. Truly enjoyed these. Can't think of which one I liked best...They're all so very perfect. Namaste. ~Anna iv... it's the toes that feel them first ;-)
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Leonard

If you are using the traditional 5/7/5 count the count is off on some of them but beautiful images are produced by your words very nice work indeed Chrystalie
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 10 months ago

Mirrored In The Moment

Marius I liked them all but you know me, gotta give ya my favs: The sea kissed the clouds . . . Soot on moist hands . . . These two rock my world!
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leonard daranjo

17 years 10 months ago

Janice

I think you have made a mistake with the name. Thank you very much for your most encouraging comment. Take care ... Leonard
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Hey Leonard

Smiles:) Barbara They are all so beautiful. I especially like number iv. Beautiful images the essence of calmness and peace. Perfect title bringing them all together in perfect harmony