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"Garments"

 I wore my Grandfather's hat today
Strange notions of thought filled my ears
Searching for lost cattle herds behind my glasses
Feeling a dry Texas sun on my face.

His old jacket on a hook by a ranch doors freedom
It hung loosely on my frame like a cloak
I was transformed into a Marlborough Man with a lean chiseld frame
Clean lines of thought in a Whip-Cord fabric costume.

I found his boots in a dusty closet
Laying there like old bums leaning against each other in a dark alley
Wearing them I itched for stirrups under my soles
His boots took me down cow tracks...walking across a prairie.

An outstretched hand in the shape of a Cottonwood tree
Skeletal fingers raking blue skies of a winter's morning
There I found his ghost sitting naked...waiting
Reaching for his clothes..."Thanks" was all he said.

DS Baker
  

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years 10 months ago

DS

ripe with memorable imagery! Loved the journey down this path. Always, Cat
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Awesome

Great imagery, wonderful travel down times highway. Well done! Rett: They say that money talks. Sadly, my wallet has laryngitis!
dbaker

dbaker

17 years 10 months ago

Thank You

Thank you my friends for your very warm remarks. I will hope to visit you and your latest poems in the next day or so. Once again, thank you for taking the time to comment on my work. All my best! -DS Baker
Mark

Mark

17 years 10 months ago

this is cool

gave me a bit of a cool feeling a pleasure, Dave. Mark
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

So very enjoyable. Great

So very enjoyable. Great idea & imagery... tell me, though, did you have a strange feeling of deja vu before or after you wrote the poem? ~Anna
dbaker

dbaker

17 years 10 months ago

Hey there!

Howdy Mark! Glad you liked this poem. The only thing that I actually inherited from my Grandfather was a Mandolin. One night as I sat there and tried to play the dern thing, I began to wonder, could clothes and such have a residual essence of those that wore them? I also freely admit I was very much in love with my eccentric Grandfather. Although he has been gone for 15 years, I still find myself talking to him in my head or remembering a funny story or joke he told. I believe that our dead are only truly dead when we stop thinking about them or having mental conversations with them. I think that until that happens we have them hovering around us just out of eye sight. All my best! -DS Baker
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

nice write

Reminds me of the book "Firestarter" by Steven King. They escape to his grandfather's house, and he's overwhelmed by the memories of his childhood. He ends up donning his grandfather's clothing, etc. Imagery was astounding in this poem. Well done. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "If you've ever emptied the back of your pickup truck by driving backward really fast and slamming on the brakes, you might be a redneck" - Jeff Foxworthy Bill Engvall: "that's how we moved"