Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Sonnet 14 (I drink the flame of love...)

I drink the flame of love from skin to bone;
The fire in your blood makes waves. In dream
Your bosom stays with me, but then, alone,
I fall asleep in harsh ways to your beam.
My sweaty brow is like a sky of ash
With birds in pain and eagles to achieve;
Just listen now and give me your red flesh
In days of famine. Swift you have to leave
As rivers left the Earth in holes of clay.
The moon is rising through the eyes of time,
And I expect the veins to whom you pray -
With passion bury me in arms of crime.
Forgotten are the paths of lonely breeze,
And trees are dying on their wooden knees.



— Unlight, Jun 25, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: Romania

More from this author

Critiques

C

Catalina

17 years 11 months ago

Technically you have the

Technically you have the sonnet correct...I am not sure that I understand the overall vision of the piece concept wise...still I am not one to tell others how to express themselves...
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Sonnet 14

The only part that stands out to me as a bit difficult to understand is "I aspect the veins to whom you pray-" as "aspect" is not a verb, which leaves me wondering what you meant. Everything else is true to form and theme. Best, Ronda
Unlight

Unlight

17 years 11 months ago

Ronda,

I accidently inserted "aspect". I think now is perfect. Greetings!