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Marius Surleac
Marius Surleac
Jun 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Epigram 3 - of a couple

Husband and wife sleeping in bed:
he dreams she’s hot model;
she thinks he’s a cupid,
with big arrows ahead

— Marius Surleac, Jun 25, 2008

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

Marius

The last two sentences actually say more than I think most will realize.... it's a wishing, almost a sadness. A hope that things will get better. Hot models aren't all they're cracked up to be.... think of how they're going to look 30 years down the road. :~) ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine!"
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Jess!It could be seen

Hi Jess! It could be seen like that too, but my intention was to create a funny moment though. Thank you very much! Cheers, Marius
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 10 months ago

funny

poignant, poignant and shyly carnal, love it. cheers, Jess