Epigram 3 - of a couple

Husband and wife sleeping in bed:
he dreams she’s hot model;
she thinks he’s a cupid,
with big arrows ahead

— Marius Surleac, Jun 25, 2008

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

Critiques

Unlight

18 years 1 month ago

This is a good epigram,

This is a good epigram, Marius! Hilarious! There's nothing to change here. Greetings!

Marius Surleac

18 years ago

thanks!

Thank you very much for your kind comment! Marius

infinite_dwarf

18 years ago

The last two sentences actually say more than I think most will realize.... it's a wishing, almost a sadness. A hope that things will get better. Hot models aren't all they're cracked up to be.... think of how they're going to look 30 years down the road. :~) ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine!"

Marius Surleac

18 years ago