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Jun 23, 2008
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Velvet Flux
Velvet Flux
infused by your inspiration
reciprocal fluid elocution
of synchronized harmony
Waltzing to the music's heartbeat
we would drift and glide on laughter
dancing attendance on physical syntax
teaching our traumas to slumber
caught in the center of our universe
until touched by your migrant spirit
I neither lived nor breathed
existence within narrow boundaries
unimaginable loneliness defined me
you crossed my impenetrable barriers
transformed this apathy of being
rescued me from bitter soul-death
my stunted reality of quiescent cynicism
a spiritless and comatose creature
like a kiss of redemption to a condemned man
bewitched am I gladly compliant
by your grace I am exonerated
my incarnate miracle Electra
— Candlewitch, Jun 23, 2008
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professor
18 years 1 month ago
The waking of both body and soul
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Keith
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
Cat
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Glad you enjoyed it
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Cat i thought you were Resting
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
LOL
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
At first reading I took in
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Jess
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
At first reading I took in
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
Cat!
Candlewitch
18 years ago
LOL!
barbsdad2003
18 years ago
It's so cotton-pickin' ...
Candlewitch
18 years ago
Chuck
orgami
18 years ago
swift like the beauty of midnight freights
Candlewitch
18 years ago
Orgami
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