pollution - a Nonet

Great Nonet as well Ronda. The idea flows exactly as the title says - the pollution saw through the "blue-grey" eyes and in the final you point out the relativity of our Universe - anything is relative ("no matter how we try"). Congratulations! best wishes, Marius

Wow... I DO learn something new every day... And a wonderfully brilliant, sparkling clear, Nonet poem of truth you have written...Rondha. Smile. Love. Anna

Just one word: Awesome, maybee two: Beautiful, maybee three:brilliant flow.

I may be gathering years enough to toss like chestnuts into the smolderin' fireplace, but this old dog can still learn a trick or two. Or even (on rare occasions) as many as three. When I first spotted your title, I assumed it asserted that what followed is not a sonnet. Thanx to your clarification/explanation of "nonet," I can feel a tad chagrined at the thought I would not have researched the word and would've rested instead on my very wrong (and tragically careless) assumption. Thanx again, Chuck

I like Chuck's thoughts on a Nonet meaning not-a-sonnet! I, too am grateful that you clarified what it was. So many forms to learn, so little time! I liked it, and it looks like it followed the form flawlessly. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine!"

I am glad too that you gave the explanation... I would have looked it up... some time or another.. well done.. enjoyed the read and the comments on your poem... Richard

Tonight Hronda, I'm going to roll up my sleeves and put my elbow to the metal er... start working on a Nonet. Check back with me in a few years. ;-) Hugs, Anna

What makes sense if you are a dead man? Where do you go when breath is gone? Did you see the light pass on? Was terror the last sound? Memories die once. Troubled waters No bridges no one left. Phew. Anna

Its just awesome. Leonard

to put such powerful meaning in such a structured form ,GREAT MEANING ,GREAT POETRY.

Quite a fine write and well thought out also. I seem to have found I enjoy reading these very much. Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a Liberal, you have no heart. At Thirty, if you are not a Conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill