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Jun 21, 2008
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Good News!!!!
GOOD NEWS!!!!
Give me back my tears,
gone away all my fears,
this call is all I hear,
The time has come
to take a stand!
The climb is just ending,
the sun, no more blinding
dark clouds vanishing,
Some one out there
ready to give a hand!!
The walls are about to crumble,
friends are more humble,
foe has lost his grumble,
The dream flight
coming back to land!!!
The skies openly smiling,
the birds happily gliding,
good news with the tide flowing,
Forget the past
your future is grand!!!!
By:-
Rahbar.
— rahbar, Jun 21, 2008
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Critiques
Rolwright
18 years 1 month ago
Inspirational
rahbar
18 years 1 month ago
Good news!!
weirdelf
18 years ago
you manage to be inspirational
weirdelf
18 years ago
enjoy your use of language too.
rahbar
18 years ago
heart warming comment.
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