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Jun 20, 2008
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Nonet - self-finding
His face trapped in the ocean’s mirror
trembles rapidly; heart is stoned,
in the bottom filled with sand!
Behind, the uttered trees
extend their branches,
like the terror
in the souls
he died
for...
trembles rapidly; heart is stoned,
in the bottom filled with sand!
Behind, the uttered trees
extend their branches,
like the terror
in the souls
he died
for...
— Marius Surleac, Jun 20, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Excellent, Marius!
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you very much Ronda
Janice Pearce
18 years 1 month ago
Marius
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
thank you!
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Rather than pass by
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you Peter
sweetness
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Marius...
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
Danke
themoonman
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Marius...
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you Richard
Calliope
18 years 1 month ago
Stunning Write,Marius
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you...
Poetic Fluffer
18 years 1 month ago
Great piece
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
You are a master wordcrafter,
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
thanks Jess
infinite_dwarf
18 years 1 month ago
Marius
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Marius
Marius Surleac
18 years ago
thank you
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