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Jun 20, 2008
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MY new gate
My new gate
Itis my new gate to enter
May be it is a small and congestive
It is safe to enter and to travel
My old passage might be broad and huge
It was worst and cruel
which swallowed my past and health
I t was a hell and devil's cave
He the Noble rescued me from that pit and
showed this heaven to heal
My heart prays Him to his mercy and
it my shower it's tears with love
Thank my God ,My Almighty
to my revival from that hell
Sakthi S.Ravichandran
Itis my new gate to enter
May be it is a small and congestive
It is safe to enter and to travel
My old passage might be broad and huge
It was worst and cruel
which swallowed my past and health
I t was a hell and devil's cave
He the Noble rescued me from that pit and
showed this heaven to heal
My heart prays Him to his mercy and
it my shower it's tears with love
Thank my God ,My Almighty
to my revival from that hell
Sakthi S.Ravichandran
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jun 20, 2008
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Critiques
Catalina
17 years 11 months ago
really powerful piece…
rahbar
17 years 11 months ago
my new gate.
Arrow
17 years 11 months ago
I like it also. It’s like