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Memories of a Mirror

Wet and naked; curious hands on sides. Observing, questioning, squinting eyes, Trying to decipher Blurred, distant images, Through mirror’s fogged surface. In the dim, faint light; Glaring, magnifying, whispering, confusing, Condensing spots on the cold surface. Strained, shivering hands; Gripping, hugging on themselves. Suppressed, constricted images surfaces, And the hollowed heart’s infinite abyss. Frantic, unrestricted rogue’s hands! The lamenting mirror cries, Reflecting dried tears, dead eyes. Into the night a candle burns; For the broken, scattered mirror, Caught in whose pieces; Shadows of two lives, Memories and shades of love.

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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

title

you asked about the title what you you say to perhaps to mirrored memories? merely a suggestion the body of the poem has an impact excellent writing give your title the same impact now your imagery is outstanding Chrystalie
Pragyan

Pragyan

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you...

Chrystalie, For your comments. Could you help me here a bit?? Could you suggest some other title for this poem?? Regards Pragyan.
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

I just did

give me another moment and I'll conjure a few more for you or you can take my suggested titles and find one of your own My pleasure if I can be of help Mirrored Images? Shaded Images? Reflections Of One? The Mirror does Not Lie? Just a few off the top of my head if you need more just ask Chrystalie
Pragyan

Pragyan

17 years 10 months ago

I love...

the third one..."Reflections of One"...I simply love it...Thank u... But let me know if you still get some more titles... Pragyan.
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

More titles

Images In Shards Prism Of Memories Looking Glass Reflections Smoke And Mirrors there you have it eight titles to toss around You are making this mind work first thing in the morning lol hope I have been of help or am I to keep going? Or combine them in a way that is suitable to you Chrystalie
Pragyan

Pragyan

17 years 10 months ago

Chrystalie...

thank you so much for giving much thought to my poem and suggesting all these titles. Could you help me here a bit more?? Tell me what do you think about these title?? Smoke and Shadows Shadows and Reflections Shadowed Images Shades of Memories Shadowed Memories Thank you Regards Pragyan.
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MeanderS

17 years 10 months ago

too much pain in such

too much pain in such memories...my mind...gets scattered...trying to hold close each one of these...ONE OF THE BEST POETRY I HAVE COME ACROSS...here...too grt to be true...carry on papaerboat...n sail as swiftly an' as far as u can...( some shades stream out light...an' this piece is one such) god bles u!!
Pragyan

Pragyan

17 years 10 months ago

Mists...

Thank you so much... You are so kind.. :) May the stars watch over you... Paper boat.