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The River Styx in Bukowski Minor

Bukowski writes:
"Love is a Dog from Hell."
And speaks of
"...that terror of one person
aching in one place alone
untended
unspoken to".
"People are not good
to each other." (Were
truer words ever spoken?)

Bukowski
was a man
who knew too much.

Dragging
his heart on a chain
behind him, like
the Ghost of Christmas Past,
broken-winged
he flew every
now and then,
but his poems always
make you say "Yes,
this is the way it is,
thanks for telling the truth
when I can't or won't”,

when I forget all that pain
is the price I paid
to the ferryman,
hunched over,
faceless.



— Kailashana, Jun 16, 2008

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Mandy

17 years 11 months ago

Powerful

Gosh... the anguish in this poem really takes me into my own anguishes of loves lost and found. I think it's wonderful. So concise. So truthful... and the rhythm and tempo of it are beautiful. Good luck with the Bukowski inspired poems. I really look forward to reading them. Mandy
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

Thank you this series is one

Thank you this series is one of my favourite themes. I have Rumiesque poems too. Talk about nonduality... from one end of the spectrum to the other... Yet both the same inspiration. Thank you. No matter how one denies it, when truth is heard, it can't be denied. ~Anna My son's partner is Mandy ;-)
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Anna...

I would like to purchase your book... great poem.. inspirational theme... broken winged he flew every now and then... what a great line. glad you posted... Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

Thanks moonman; you’ll

Thanks moonman; you'll have to wait. "The Dawn Tree" is way over a year in its birth... and I still have to write more Bukowski poems. I think I have about 10 now, 3 or 4 are posted at Neopoet. I am honoured every time you comment. ~Anna
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Why thank you Anna...

as I am humbled every time I read one of your writes.. thank you for your lovely response.. Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 11 months ago

You remind me of a Realtor

You remind me of a Realtor associate in my previous incarnation b.p. (before poet) he and I used to argue all the time, even though we liked each other. (barely!) lol. I miss him. ~Anna