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rahbar
Jun 15, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Testing

Testing  Let me test the groundfor its power to holdfor its warmth and cold, Let me test the groundfor its willingness to bearfor its readiness to care, Let me test the groundwill it fertile the seedand protect its breed,  Let me test the groundis it ready for the battle?when the skies rattle, Let me test the groundcan it accept the change?and widen its range. By… Rahbar.
— rahbar, Jun 15, 2008

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rahbar

18 years 1 month ago

what kind of comment you

what kind of comment you require, I don't understand. this is my first poem..I hope every one appreciates it.
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rahbar

18 years ago

Your comment on 'Testing'.

Great Thanks Jess...You all are great guys I understand and appreciate...your comments are most...always welcome. Rahbar.
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weirdelf

18 years ago

I just got back to this Rahbar

and it is an outstanding debut. I will certainly read more of your work. A little hint about this community. The more you read and comment on other poems on the site, the more interest you are likely to generate in your own. cheers, Jess
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Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

16 years 6 months ago

Testing

Hello Rahbar! Somehow I had missed this poem of yours. It is a good poem - a thought provoking poem as most of your poems are. I am back from long absence and will have time to read your remarkable work. How are you keeping? I hope your problems are all resolved. -Mohammad

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