Please Show Me The Howling World

unusual love poem but it works I can find nothing wrong with this poem nice work Chrystalie

We can't always get what we wan't but if you try sometimes you just might find that you'll get what you need That's a song that I forget who sings but it has a message Alot is only riddles to me and maybe life is not as confusing as I make most situations Who we are is what makes us unique Stay who you are cause you are who you are for a reason Peace Rolwright

and all its forces offered up as a gift of love.....you dont want anything small gift-wrapped then Anna? But seriously it is yet another compelling poem. I really loved: "Let me see how the wild wind blows In the hollow of your neck" If i am honest i am not so keen on "Give me grace" at the end although it obviously helps make it feel even more like a supplication/prayer. Keith

I am new here, but I really liked your poem. I liked it all, it made me feel peaceful. thanks for sharing

in walks I find my coal beautiful and betrayed washed ashore from long dead steam engines smooth and dark in my pocket layers of history pressed not yet become diamonds nor ever today i write and read chilled penniless for two more days forty eight hours my mind and soul hacked by music and Neopoets keys turning box doors open where sand and light intoxicatants sift the last cursed door to break the last dogs howl as Howard Carter dies (your poems anesthasize the carnival dogs..) I smile with intrepid delight!!!