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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Jun 15, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Listen and Adore

Senryu:
Listen


Fireflies glow at night
as critters sing, but not seen
under dark heavens


Adore


Arms like a cocoon
is keeping the heart sheltered
as love grows stronger


 


— Barbara Writes, Jun 15, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Mark

Mark

18 years 1 month ago

Sweet Barbara

This is nice I enjoyed the image. Fi er flies that may be three syllables I'll check it for ya ;) Mark Nope that is 2 syllables lol Wow ! You are awesome ! Mark (again)
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 1 month ago

Mark

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks, your appreciation for my is dear to me.
R

rider68

18 years 1 month ago

Really Nice Barbara

You seen to be quite at home writing this style, Hats off to you for your creativity, really good, Best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 1 month ago

Peter

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks, I really appreciate having you as a friend

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