Listen and Adore

Senryu:
Listen

Fireflies glow at night
as critters sing, but not seen
under dark heavens

Adore

Arms like a cocoon
is keeping the heart sheltered
as love grows stronger

— Barbara Writes, Jun 15, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

Critiques

Mark

17 years 12 months ago

Sweet Barbara

This is nice I enjoyed the image. Fi er flies that may be three syllables I'll check it for ya ;) Mark Nope that is 2 syllables lol Wow ! You are awesome ! Mark (again)

Barbara Writes

17 years 11 months ago

Mark

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks, your appreciation for my is dear to me.

rider68

17 years 11 months ago

Really Nice Barbara

You seen to be quite at home writing this style, Hats off to you for your creativity, really good, Best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Barbara Writes

17 years 11 months ago