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Growing old.


 

 

 

 


Growing old.


 

 

 

 

 

 


Growing old, grey in the hair

but walking tall, in top gear

and sits comfortable

in his favorite chair.

 

Once very unrelenting,

uncompromising,

now a little, mellow

ready to share.

 

Lanky still and active

but not as one want to believe,

needing more rest

and more care

 

Gone are the best years

happy greetings and cheers,

now feeling a little fear

and slight despair.

 

Unable to slowdown

never ready to go down

living still in the past

future unprepared.

 

Always now complaining

of the world, declining

of the young lazy ones

with no heart to dare.

 

Talking of his younger times

when he was the central flame

of all the beautiful dames

with the hairiest tale to bare.

 

Searching here and there

with piercing stare

trying to still locate

romance in the air.

 

By:-

Rahbar.

 

 

 

 

 



 

 

 


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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Rahbar

suggestion and it is only a suggestion perhaps a bit of a change in the wording "hair of grey" "he sits comfortable in his chair" drop the second very and just use uncompromising You have painted a beautifully clear image of an elder. very nicely done Chrystalie
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rahbar

17 years 10 months ago

Growing old.

Hello Chrystalie, Thanks for your suggestion, I really appreciate it. Rahbar.
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Dangit, quit talkin about me

*LOL* Man, so much of that is like my kids perceive me that it isn't funny.Good write with the changes already suggested. Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
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rahbar

17 years 10 months ago

Growing old.

Its really heartening to know you relate to the poem. Thanks Rett,to let me know that... Rahbar.