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MEL
Jun 14, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Tired of the Tears....

Another day, another tear falls
I can feel my heart breaking
can't do this anymore!
Where is my happy ending???
I look into my baby's eyes...
he has no idea, this sadness inside.
Tired of this rollercoaster,
it's time for me to get off this ride.
Another tears rolls down my face
It's a side of me you'll never see...
I hide it well, it's not for show
this side of me you'll never know.
I've had enough, I'm crying out......
Bring on the life
I've been dreaming about!!!!
— MEL, Jun 14, 2008

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purplemoondoll

18 years 1 month ago

Written with honesty and

Written with honesty and passion. I felt this has the potential to develop into something more if you wanted to. See what you think. The rhythm and flow are great. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
Rett

Rett

18 years 1 month ago

Tired of Tears

I don't think that anyone is ever completely satisfied all the time and there are times we all want to just scream..BRING ON THAT LIFE I SEE IN MY DREAMS! If I had my way I would be young and healthy in my twenties (no way in hell I would go through my teenage years again). As you can see your poem struck a note with me. Keep on keeping on Mel. Rett anything free is worth just what you pay for it.
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MEL

18 years 1 month ago

Thanks

Mel Inwood I have been accessing a different part of my brain lately it seems hahaha, Alot of weird stuff happening in my head...which is good for inspiration, it's finding the right words to express what I'm feeling that's the hard part...any suggestions would be great! xxxx Mel
Rett

Rett

18 years 1 month ago

Mel

I find in those types of moods I just write everything down whichever way it comes, then later, at your leisure, you can read them and see what inspires you to write a poem, then work on the words from there. My mind comes up with really weird stuff sometimes. Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
SM

Secrets and Memories

18 years 1 month ago

My dear...

I could feel how you felt. Such a poem of feeling is one that touches others quite passionatly. To write something of life or your imagination is what brings a poem to life. And you my dear, know how to exactly do that..

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