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Jun 14, 2008
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Country Girl Growing Up
Country Girl Growing Up
Part 1
Monster under My Bed
The restroom was so far away
I rise from my leisure jumping from my bed
I ran as not to get caught by unseen hands
that lived under my bed
On the way back I stood by the door
watching the bed so far away
afraid to return to my slumber
a fifty yard dash in two seconds
to quick for those hands
I made the long jump
Bed Post Owl
I lay awake
being chastise by the bed post owl
it carefully watches my every move
no sleep for this girl
Sleepless Nights
I roam the dark
while all were asleep
moonlight shine through window pane
and guided my steps into the shadows
three little girls sharing a bed
two little girls fast asleep
as shadow guards lay next to them
one little girl sits on the bed
wide awake watching them sleep
the moonlight disappear
she falls asleep before the dawn
Drunken Jealous Rage
He was a man carrying a gun
loud voices, fighting in the night
wanting to see who was there
my white teeth was all he saw
when he aim to pull the trigger
mommy screams she is your child
She’s Mine, No She’s Mine
Caught between two fighting parenta baby girl, their first-born
survives a silly tug of war
falling into the hearth of fire
the swaddling blanket that sheltered her
did not cover her precious arm
— Barbara Writes, Jun 14, 2008
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IKnowNoBox
17 years 12 months ago
Listen and Adore
Barbara Writes
17 years 12 months ago
Thanks Mark
IKnowNoBox
17 years 12 months ago
You know I am in a forum on another sight about this very topic
Barbara Writes
17 years 12 months ago
Thanks Mark
Janice Pearce
17 years 12 months ago
Barb
Barbara Writes
17 years 12 months ago
I prefer Barbara
Janice Pearce
17 years 12 months ago
Barb
Barbara Writes
17 years 12 months ago
Janice
Janice Pearce
17 years 12 months ago
Sorry
Barbara Writes
17 years 12 months ago
I am sorry
rider68
17 years 11 months ago
Loved the Imagination
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks Rett
rahbar
17 years 11 months ago
Interesting poetry.