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The Red Ghost (finished product)
Red Ghost
A haze rises from the south.
Covering ev’rything with its blood-red cloak.
Turning the horizon into a distortion.
My eyes start to burn.
The air has an almost putrid taste.
The larger wafts reduce visibility.
An occurrence so significant as to warrant caution.
Warnings which of course this red ghost will not heed.
As it continues traveling; haunting our fair state.
A man travels, talking to a love past.
His voice booms within the confines of plastic.
The ghost, with its dark fingers reaches out to him.
Encapsulated within the mists; the man looks around.
He is blind, and scared.
He misjudges the illusions that the ghost puts forth - and swerves.
His screams fill the air; the ghost claims another victim.
And issuing an eerie laugh, it drifts on…
Critiques
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
The Red Ghost
orgami
18 years 1 month ago
the red masque
IKnowNoBox
18 years 1 month ago
We are dealing with fires here as well..
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
Jess
purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
Powerful imagery that placed
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Sorry Mate
IKnowNoBox
18 years 1 month ago
Here is where I see a source..
infinite_dwarf
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks all!
barbsdad2003
18 years 1 month ago
I am so in agreement ...
leonard daranjo
18 years 1 month ago
I like the title
infinite_dwarf
18 years 1 month ago
Ok Y'all....
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
jess
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Great job, Jess
Janice Pearce
18 years 1 month ago
Jess
Rett
18 years 1 month ago
es Muy Bueno
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
An idea Became a Battle Which you Conquered - So Well
infinite_dwarf
18 years 1 month ago
thanks so much!
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