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The Red Ghost (finished product)
Red Ghost
A haze rises from the south.
Covering ev’rything with its blood-red cloak.
Turning the horizon into a distortion.
My eyes start to burn.
The air has an almost putrid taste.
The larger wafts reduce visibility.
An occurrence so significant as to warrant caution.
Warnings which of course this red ghost will not heed.
As it continues traveling; haunting our fair state.
A man travels, talking to a love past.
His voice booms within the confines of plastic.
The ghost, with its dark fingers reaches out to him.
Encapsulated within the mists; the man looks around.
He is blind, and scared.
He misjudges the illusions that the ghost puts forth - and swerves.
His screams fill the air; the ghost claims another victim.
And issuing an eerie laugh, it drifts on…
Critiques
RSScheerer
17 years 12 months ago
The Red Ghost
orgami
17 years 12 months ago
the red masque
IKnowNoBox
17 years 12 months ago
We are dealing with fires here as well..
poewriter58
17 years 12 months ago
Jess
purplemoondoll
17 years 12 months ago
Powerful imagery that placed
rider68
17 years 12 months ago
Sorry Mate
IKnowNoBox
17 years 11 months ago
Here is where I see a source..
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
Thanks all!
barbsdad2003
17 years 11 months ago
I am so in agreement ...
leonard daranjo
17 years 11 months ago
I like the title
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
Ok Y'all....
poewriter58
17 years 11 months ago
jess
RSScheerer
17 years 11 months ago
Great job, Jess
Janice Pearce
17 years 11 months ago
Jess
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
es Muy Bueno
rider68
17 years 11 months ago
An idea Became a Battle Which you Conquered - So Well
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
thanks so much!