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Sonnet 7

The poem of my mind is mind itself
And no one should sustain that's only dust,
Because the finest book stays on a shelf
And represents the voices of my lust.
Emotion brings together two or three
Ecstatic words by writing them on stone.
I want to swim with blood in veins of spree -
Tonight, my love, denude me bone by bone.
Behold the sense of sun in sour ash
Day after day, and maybe months, to stare;
At some point, there, your very tears may bash
The fire flies we used to kindly share
As our rings of light that brought one love
In stepless stairs from deep to way above.
— Unlight, Jun 13, 2008

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purplemoondoll

17 years 12 months ago

I love the rhythm and flow

I love the rhythm and flow - it drives the poem forward beautfully. good language use and imagery. This was very enjoyable to read. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 11 months ago

superb writing of course

won't say more till you get a title. It is is sheer arrogance to think you don't need one. You think you got a groupie club like Shakespeare? cheers, Jess
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Sonnet 7

unlight, There is So much beauty in your words! Thank You~ "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers