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Jun 13, 2008
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spin about the spirit of night
the dark deepness of dreams
by atomic force release
the very things buried
neath skin neath soul
till looking out
and looking back
is the seperate self
those eyes
that see
that mouth that
talks
swift current of hands
deft movements
forever stretching
darkening at the edges
like silver oxide
under the filiment
the mirrors lies
this what she sees
what she wants too
feel
where am I real??
O
— orgami, Jun 13, 2008
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Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
smart and interesting
orgami
18 years 1 month ago
Korrekt
Alobar
18 years 1 month ago
Years ago, I experimented a
infinite_dwarf
18 years 1 month ago
O
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