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Jun 10, 2008
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Last Weekend in Bohemian Wisconsin
Dance with me temptation -
Van Gogh nights with Ra Fury jazz
filling the air like fireworks
We will flirt and sip drinks
pretending to be noir
as you grope and we laugh
Tornado beach parties
breathing Wisconsin
at above legal limit
Walk of shame for the guiltless
who carry no burdens
heels like tap shoes
We get lost with a purpose
Palatine and midway
with White Castle breaks
Blunts and echoes of stories
decorated with stolen street signs
occupied by the scientist whose skin cries
Van Gogh nights with Ra Fury jazz
filling the air like fireworks
We will flirt and sip drinks
pretending to be noir
as you grope and we laugh
Tornado beach parties
breathing Wisconsin
at above legal limit
Walk of shame for the guiltless
who carry no burdens
heels like tap shoes
We get lost with a purpose
Palatine and midway
with White Castle breaks
Blunts and echoes of stories
decorated with stolen street signs
occupied by the scientist whose skin cries
— Lynn Jasmin, Jun 10, 2008
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purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
Blunts and echoes of
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
I agree with Kaz, that last
LadyTheresa
56 years 7 months ago
I like your piece Lynn
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