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Jun 09, 2008
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Sonnet 3
The rain of summer fills the empty shores
Before a gleam shall hide from sun to earth
In holes of sand that open thirteen doors
A dusty world - the shining of one firth.
I cannot bear to see those bloody eyes
How grovel to the gates of storm. As lord,
My quiver calls for death and weather cries
Like no one cried below the moaning chord...
Perverted are the claws of faith, but still
The water cleans our hands in wisdom. I
Am now against the Eden to fulfill
My destiny that put me here to lie.
Over and over, waves are turning wise
As if the time were glowing through the skies.
Before a gleam shall hide from sun to earth
In holes of sand that open thirteen doors
A dusty world - the shining of one firth.
I cannot bear to see those bloody eyes
How grovel to the gates of storm. As lord,
My quiver calls for death and weather cries
Like no one cried below the moaning chord...
Perverted are the claws of faith, but still
The water cleans our hands in wisdom. I
Am now against the Eden to fulfill
My destiny that put me here to lie.
Over and over, waves are turning wise
As if the time were glowing through the skies.
— Unlight, Jun 09, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years ago
Unlight
Unlight
17 years 12 months ago
Well… I copied the poem
RSScheerer
17 years 12 months ago
Happens sometimes with
Janice Pearce
17 years 11 months ago
Sonnet 3
Jacob
17 years 11 months ago
I agree I love sonnets and
MeanderS
17 years 11 months ago
MAY THE LORD BLES U!!!! the
poewriter58
17 years 11 months ago
How grovel to the gates this
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
I just wont read your sonnet titles
Unlight
17 years 11 months ago
Jess,
RSScheerer
17 years 11 months ago
Unlight
Unlight
17 years 11 months ago
Ronda,
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
Ok, I read and glad I did.
Synchro
17 years 10 months ago
Excellent work as always