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Jun 09, 2008
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Sonnet 3
The rain of summer fills the empty shores
Before a gleam shall hide from sun to earth
In holes of sand that open thirteen doors
A dusty world - the shining of one firth.
I cannot bear to see those bloody eyes
How grovel to the gates of storm. As lord,
My quiver calls for death and weather cries
Like no one cried below the moaning chord...
Perverted are the claws of faith, but still
The water cleans our hands in wisdom. I
Am now against the Eden to fulfill
My destiny that put me here to lie.
Over and over, waves are turning wise
As if the time were glowing through the skies.
Before a gleam shall hide from sun to earth
In holes of sand that open thirteen doors
A dusty world - the shining of one firth.
I cannot bear to see those bloody eyes
How grovel to the gates of storm. As lord,
My quiver calls for death and weather cries
Like no one cried below the moaning chord...
Perverted are the claws of faith, but still
The water cleans our hands in wisdom. I
Am now against the Eden to fulfill
My destiny that put me here to lie.
Over and over, waves are turning wise
As if the time were glowing through the skies.
— Unlight, Jun 09, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Unlight
Unlight
18 years 1 month ago
Well… I copied the poem
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Happens sometimes with
Janice Pearce
18 years 1 month ago
Sonnet 3
Jacob
18 years 1 month ago
I agree I love sonnets and
MeanderS
18 years 1 month ago
MAY THE LORD BLES U!!!! the
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
How grovel to the gates this
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
I just wont read your sonnet titles
Unlight
18 years 1 month ago
Jess,
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Unlight
Unlight
18 years 1 month ago
Ronda,
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
Ok, I read and glad I did.
Synchro
18 years ago
Excellent work as always
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