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Jun 08, 2008
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Sonnet 2
Let's fight the air and spread a fire ball
That shall not pass with arms or legs in heat,
But we'll be there and see the meaning, small,
Embracing souls, tonight, beneath our feet.
The mighty fog, the castle and the light
We're forced to hunt inside a starving heart,
Are just in vain or lesser than the fight
For love to be a place occult and smart?
Where are we now, in heaven or in hell?
The demons brought the silence with their mean
Emotions carved in deepness as a spell
For those the Earth will be the last they've seen.
My life is victim to your arms, along
With trees and rocks that are already strong.
That shall not pass with arms or legs in heat,
But we'll be there and see the meaning, small,
Embracing souls, tonight, beneath our feet.
The mighty fog, the castle and the light
We're forced to hunt inside a starving heart,
Are just in vain or lesser than the fight
For love to be a place occult and smart?
Where are we now, in heaven or in hell?
The demons brought the silence with their mean
Emotions carved in deepness as a spell
For those the Earth will be the last they've seen.
My life is victim to your arms, along
With trees and rocks that are already strong.
— Unlight, Jun 08, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
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18 years 1 month ago
Ronda, i’m glad that you
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Rich with ...
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
Line six we forced may I
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Chrystalie,
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Daniel
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18 years 1 month ago
Thank you, Janice, for your
Janice Pearce
18 years 1 month ago
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18 years 1 month ago
Janine,
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Janice
Synchro
18 years ago
Beautiful sonnet, and very powerful
yenti
17 years 9 months ago
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