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Jun 10, 2008
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The Scream - inspired from Edvard Munch’s canvas
When skies ignite from mouths of hell
the ocean cries with tears of dust
With shadows still the fiord’s shell
will shrink the space, the time and lust
Those drums that beat the walls of heart
will push the strings of pain below
The wooden dock will send a dart
with panic, from the terror’s bow
A scream has brought the humble soul
within the borders drawn by angst,
in silent birth; death brings a toll,
that turns the body back in dust
the ocean cries with tears of dust
With shadows still the fiord’s shell
will shrink the space, the time and lust
Those drums that beat the walls of heart
will push the strings of pain below
The wooden dock will send a dart
with panic, from the terror’s bow
A scream has brought the humble soul
within the borders drawn by angst,
in silent birth; death brings a toll,
that turns the body back in dust
Comments
Vulgar Peregrine
17 years 11 months ago
Good! Reminds me of
Marius Surleac
17 years 11 months ago
thank you!
Synchro
17 years 11 months ago
Very consistent regular flow to this piece
Marius Surleac
17 years 11 months ago
Thank you very much!
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
Munch might be very pissed off,
Marius Surleac
17 years 9 months ago
Danke