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Jun 05, 2008
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Save the Aliens!
Humans think they are so fucking special.
Snorts.
We are smart enough to destroy ourselves
and our planet
but are we smart enough to save ourselves
and our planet?
Are we even special?
One of nine planets in this solar system,
others of which
might sustain life
might have sustained life
might yet sustain life.
Not necessarily life as we know it.
And this sun is one of around
one hundred billion
in this galaxy
And this galaxy is one of around
two hundred billion in the universe
... and counting
Anyone care to take odds on alien life?
So why no irrefutable contact?
A few reasons come up,
maybe faster than light travel is truly impossible
maybe we just don’t recognise them,
in their alien-ness,
my favourite is
by the time they know enough
to pass between the stars,
they know enough
not to fuck with the natives.
At least till they learn
not to fuck with themselves
or their planet.
Any way you look at it,
they are probably there.
Poor things.
If sentient they have free will
if they have free will
they have the capacity
and inclination to evil
(so we are told)
so they must need a Messiah
(so we are told)
but there is only one
(so we are told)
Poor bastard!
Bugger of a job,
even for a god.
Dying a trillion, trillion gruesome deaths
all over the universe.
Thanks for the work, Dad!
Or maybe they don’t need a Messiah
(hush boy! Cover your mouth)
maybe,
just maybe,
they needed,
like us,
to save themselves.
— weirdelf, Jun 05, 2008
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Critiques
poewriter58
18 years ago
Jess
weirdelf
18 years ago
Thanks Chrys
poewriter58
18 years ago
Jess
barbsdad2003
18 years ago
Wow!
weirdelf
18 years ago
ta Chuck, I bask in your monarchical approval
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Way too long to read
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
Jess
themoonman
18 years ago
Now this is good
weirdelf
18 years ago
ta Richard
Kailashana
18 years ago
Humans, at this stage of
weirdelf
18 years ago
Hugs right back Anna,
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
I really like it !
Kailashana
18 years ago
I’ll dig out an article
Kailashana
18 years ago
http://youtube.com/watch?v=mu
weirdelf
18 years ago
precisely my point,
barbsdad2003
18 years ago
I agree, Jess ...
rider68
18 years ago
Sadley Chuck speaks words of wisdom
leonard daranjo
18 years ago
Hi Jess
Kailashana
18 years ago
well…colour me green…
weirdelf
18 years ago
Chuck, Peter, Leonard, Anna
purplemoondoll
17 years 12 months ago
So why no irrefutable
weirdelf
17 years 12 months ago
ta Kaz
Candlewitch
17 years 12 months ago
(((Jess))) Thanks for
Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
well I disagree
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
diid you even read this?
Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
Yes I read it
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
I don't doubt your integrity for a moment.
orgami
17 years 11 months ago
Aliens
Kailashana
17 years 11 months ago
How brilliant orgami. I
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Save the Aliens
autumnphoenix
17 years 10 months ago
I may not
weirdelf
17 years 10 months ago
love your thoughts
bellavistabear
17 years 10 months ago
I like the way you think
weirdelf
17 years 10 months ago
I would probably be one of the silly hippies
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 9 months ago
Autum I would tend to agree with you