Kalediscope Eyes

I am not touching a word of this perfectly written poem. Your wording is astounding . I have seen your work and is always good , but this one is exceptional Chrystalie

There is great creativity here, "Beautiful" and flows very well, Loved all of it, Brilliant. Very Best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

of my kids and all of the art work of theirs I've saved over the years.. I showed my oldest daughter some one day and I swear I could still see the little girl in her.. beautiful poem Janice.. thanks for sharing .. Richard

A very dreamy write. I never thought before of eyes as kaleidoscopic (check your spelling of the word) but it conjures up an image of impressions that are multiple for the sky, the moon, and the stars...and says it quite succinctly and attractively. There is more to this piece than one first sees....always a mark of good poetry. Yours in peace, Synchro

This came out really well, Janice. Reminds me of a time when everything was easy. ~Jess ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants." - Thomas Jefferson ~ "Tonight's forcast: dark, continued dark tonight, turning to partly light in the morning..." - George Carlin

I found myself transported into the college, the image of a scissor moon and extinguished chalk stars was just exquisite, heart wrenching. I love the sinister undertones from the childs painting. I find myself re-reading this poem to try and unravel the multiplicities that are within it. great job. Jacob

To me it lacks oomph But that is my fault, you know I am a ratbag, cheers, Jess