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Calliope
Jun 07, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Addicted

You're like a drug
I can't stay away
You have me hooked
I want you all day
All evening
All night
You're all I think about
I'm addicted to you
If I can't have you
I shout
I scream
And I cry
For just one more taste
Of your beautiful poison
Not a drop to waste
The feelings you breed
I'm addicted to you
So mellow
So calm
I see lights of blue
Hallucinations
Before my eyes
Manipulations,
Your voice devised
So high
So addicted
So blinded by you
I'm hooked
I'm an addict
I'm so in love with you.

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Synchro

17 years 11 months ago

No wasted words, here!

You win the "poem of the day" for conciseness. I can't find a single flaw. :-) Yours in peace, Synchro
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Calliope

17 years 11 months ago

lol funny

i'll fill it in,in a minute i dont know why it didnt show Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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rider68

17 years 11 months ago

Quite Disturbing

Hi Lacey I have looked deeply and am lost within the spiritual hidden thoughts It's quite different with a surreal touch, may I say a slight vagueness. Better Posting next time......I hate it when this happens, Best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
professor

professor

17 years 11 months ago

This is absolutely

beautiful Lacy, and such a pleasured acceptance of your addiction. I like how you have used the repetitions of I'm and So at the beginnings of the lines to enhance the repetitive sense of the addiction. Your addicted Prof PS "Menestrations"? perhaps "Fenestrations"?
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Calliope

17 years 11 months ago

Manipulations

I had it fixed ,a little tipsy posting and couldnt think of the word i wanted,forgive the mistake,my dear professor,and never stop teaching me. Teachers pet, Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
professor

professor

17 years 11 months ago

It will always

be a pleasure to teach you Lacy dear...as well as to learn. Your Prof
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

Lucy

This came out excellent, I think. It reminded me of the Nick Drake song "Place To Be" - mainly the line "Now I'm weaker than the palest blue. Oh, so weak in this need for you." Really liked your line about needing another taste of poison. Nice job here. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants." - Thomas Jefferson ~ "Tonight's forcast: dark, continued dark tonight, turning to partly light in the morning..." - George Carlin
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abrelosojos

17 years 11 months ago

all evening all night, arent

all evening all night, arent they the same thing? lol poem was a little too typical for me to be honest...ive read hundreds just like it. fragile things: take flight!
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orgami

17 years 11 months ago

Like this poem

I like darker poems and I can relate because well I can I enjoyed this poem and the length works for me
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rider68

17 years 11 months ago

It was well worth a second Look

Lacey Done yourself proud girl, Although it helps when one can read what the writer has written, I got quite scared..Thought it was another trip to the - optitions,LoL But truthfully this is very good, Kindest Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
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Calliope

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks everyone.

this was just a moment in time i had to capture ,no editing or thinking involved just a rolling stream that poured from my pen, and no i beleive evening and night are separated, early evening when the sun has just gone down and then night the hours you are usually sleeping.I like it fine for it is a memory for me and its fine if not many like it ,it is not why i wrote it,thanx again for reading and taking the time to read everyone,appreciated greatly Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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cricket

17 years 10 months ago

I enjoyed this poem

One in which I can relate ... For just one more taste Of your beautiful poison Not a drop to waste The feelings you breed I’m addicted to you So mellow So calm I see lights of blue Hallucinations Before my eyes these lines really say so much Lacy... reminds me of someone I know and love but have lost.. good memories though.. thanks for sharing your heart. BrownEyesBlue
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Calliope

17 years 10 months ago

Anytime.

All of my poetry is a peice of my heart,though some are just for fun ,they are all a part of me.Thanks cricket for reading. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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Shadow_whispers

17 years 10 months ago

Ohhh, I know how that is and

Ohhh, I know how that is and you explain it beautifully. It's wonderful and dangerous at the same time. I love the way you described it as beautiful poison. Very nicely done.
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Calliope

17 years 10 months ago

Yes exactly

I'm glad you caught the danger in the wonder,subtle but there all the same. Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.