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The Sword and the Rose, Part 2

The Sword and The Rose
Part II: The Rose of Love


New fallen snow, sat two below
Huddled 'round a sullen fire
Shaking with cold, neither old
They talked of matters dire

A lean-to tent, corners rent
'Twas all the shelter had
'Neath fur and hide, didst abide
The two in blizzard bad

Come breaking dawn didst move on
Down to the valley low
Onward they rode, sweet streams flowed
And wind didst softly blow

Grassland so sweet, 'neath bare feet
Slowly they made their way
Flowers in bloom shed their gloom
They rested for the day

Flaming red hair, skin so fair
Lips burning ruby red
A laughing smile, woman's wiles
To danger both be led

Passions enflamed, wrapped in chains
Hearts longing to be free
Her luscious lips, laughter tipped
Yearned for what eyes didst see

Her arms did ache, longed to take
And hold the warrior strong
Her face grew flushed, blood did lust
For what she knew was wrong

Restless hands reached, heart beseeched
And prayed he'd hold her close
The world didst turn, passions burned
And soon wouldst damn them both

End part II...

— Rett, Jun 03, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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poewriter58

18 years ago

gene

Cannot wait for part three. Your writing brings to mind one of my favorite poems The Charge Of The Light Brigade( Tennyson) not so much in it's content but the mood my dad would recite this quite often magnificent or another, Abu Ben Adhem ( James Hunt). Chrys
Rett

Rett

18 years ago

Wow! Praise indeed

I Loved charge of the light brigade but never thought anyone would even think I could create the same type of mood. To coin a phrase I am in "shock and awe". Thank you so much even if I am undeserving. Rett
Rett

Rett

18 years ago

Janice

Thank you. I appreciate the praise. *S* Rett