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Jun 01, 2008
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The Sword and the Rose Part 1
The Sword and The Rose
Part I: The Sword of Fate
A warrior strong, hair worn long
Arms mighty as an oak
A fighting man, sword in hand
Of his prowess is oft spoke
With mighty sword, once felled a horde
Many were those that died
'Neath flashing blade in quiet glade
Where winds of sorrow sighed
Sword shining bright, solidified light
Agleam in morning sun
With whistling sound, blood-soaked ground
Alive was left but one
With comely wench in lusty clinch
His manly needs were great
Three or four and sometimes more
His baser needs he'd sate
One fateful day there came his way
Heavy purse filled with gold
From noble born, tired and worn
Bod' shaking from the cold
A lady fair, of flaming hair
With lips of ruby red
Must ride this day and hide away
Or else she will be dead
Forty coins gold would he then hold
The price to save the maid
In all the land was no man
Could stand against his blade
With gold-filled purse, foul danger lurked
Death hid behind each stone
No safety found, road or town
They rode just two alone
Two homespun cloaks, patches didst invoke
Visage of meager means
Beneath star light late one night
Didst passion take to wing
A warrior strong, a maiden's song
In each other were they lost
Forbidden tryst, lives didst twist
And dear would be the cost
end part one...
Part I: The Sword of Fate
A warrior strong, hair worn long
Arms mighty as an oak
A fighting man, sword in hand
Of his prowess is oft spoke
With mighty sword, once felled a horde
Many were those that died
'Neath flashing blade in quiet glade
Where winds of sorrow sighed
Sword shining bright, solidified light
Agleam in morning sun
With whistling sound, blood-soaked ground
Alive was left but one
With comely wench in lusty clinch
His manly needs were great
Three or four and sometimes more
His baser needs he'd sate
One fateful day there came his way
Heavy purse filled with gold
From noble born, tired and worn
Bod' shaking from the cold
A lady fair, of flaming hair
With lips of ruby red
Must ride this day and hide away
Or else she will be dead
Forty coins gold would he then hold
The price to save the maid
In all the land was no man
Could stand against his blade
With gold-filled purse, foul danger lurked
Death hid behind each stone
No safety found, road or town
They rode just two alone
Two homespun cloaks, patches didst invoke
Visage of meager means
Beneath star light late one night
Didst passion take to wing
A warrior strong, a maiden's song
In each other were they lost
Forbidden tryst, lives didst twist
And dear would be the cost
end part one...
— Rett, Jun 01, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years ago
How epic
Rett
18 years ago
How Epic
rider68
18 years ago
There's Magic In Your Words
Rett
18 years ago
There's Magic in Your Words
poewriter58
18 years ago
Gene
Rett
18 years ago
Sword and Rose suggestion
Rett
18 years ago
Sword and Rose
Rett
18 years ago
Rett or Gene
Janice Pearce
18 years ago
Hi Rett
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
Why did I think of Fritz Lieber, sans humour?
Rett
17 years 11 months ago
Jess