A timeless Love

I don’t need to miss his face every minute of the dayOr cry myself to sleep, not having seen himI don’t need to have him on my mind all the timeTo know there’s something that will never die I’m done morning the death of what wasI attended the funeral about a thousand timesI’m living my life now and it’s healthy and happy But once you brush the tears away you can calmly admitI’m in love with him in a timeless way No one I meet can compare, trust me I’ve triedNo one I know understandsI didn’t even know I had a type until now, but I do, it’s him. And that’s it. No logic behind it, I forgave him 77x7Most would hate and regret and have nothing to do with it anymoreBut I don’t care; the hurt now expected just a jab at something indestructible I love him, and I always willMy perfect fit, that’s it.Nothing else will do and I’m not one to settle Weather we end up on the same path or a million miles a wayI’m in love with him in a weird wayA timeless way

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Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 11 months ago

very nice I'll have to keep An eye on you I must make a note or

I'll forget I think if you found a different word for weird in the second to the last line for you did state that in the first part it was one way at the beginnig and it might be the same at the ending but usally it is not maybe percueler or strange or some other word that implies weird and growth oh and by the way I don't spell very well so don't follow any of my spellings ever Up to you always creative lisciens an all but That's the only thing I could pick out Nice job Donnie/Sinbad

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Welcome...

glad to see young talent.. I see promise in your write.. but I have to say one thing.. if you have to forgive someone 77x7 then you have less respect for yourself than they do.. sorry, had to throw that in.. you had some major spelling errors.. morning... should be mourning weather... should be whether and.. now this is just my opinion... if you left off your first two sentences.. and only kept it on the ending, it could make that statement stronger.. that is only my own thoughts as you are the author.. again...welcome to Neopoet.. Richard

Frost Smith

17 years 11 months ago

Stavroula...

While the heart felt emotions came across I have to agree with themoonman here; its a departure from your other work, I see more the beginings of a poem or maybe a blog entry, I read most of your other work and its very original and alot of unique thought sure some of that could spill over here. Do not mean to be harsh at all, but perhaps if you dig deeper then you will not only end up with a great poem, but also some release from grief, at least that has been my experience when writing. Respectfully Frost

dsaranti

17 years 11 months ago

A timeless Love

Your poem expresses my past experience 100%. I was madly in love with a girl called Nancy and one day she dumped me, never found out why. I kept sobbing and weeping for months saying I will never forget her. I even went to a councilor who told me all the time "let go". I couldn't hear those words...I couldn't imagine the thought. For me it was Nancy forever, nothing else. Then I met Elaine, (read all about her in my poems under dsaranti). I saw Elaine for months and although she was a lot smarter and prettier all I thought about was Nancy. Gradually I fell in love with Elaine, forgot Nancy and even started hating her. So, everything is possible in this world. I still can't believe it happened. Trust me its possible to forget someone at least in the way I described. Your friend Dimitri