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It's Cool to Be Old!


It's Cool to Be Old!

O what venerable
[C]reatures ... the aged ....


                                ---Traherne

[But alas! t]here are
[too] few who ... grow old
with ... good grace[---
or so I'm random told].

                                      ---Steele

After long youth spent
dodging bullets comes
old age---for celebrating!

                                ---barbsdad

I am so sold
On growing old!

It is way cool,
Says this old fool.

A rich adventure
Jam-packed with gold,

Ever' day's ’nother day
Exciting to behold.

And when I'm through and done
With this old life, this one,

I'd like to re-sign up as old ...
Completely reenrolled.
 

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Michael Landau

17 years 11 months ago

I'm glad to hear it!

Hello Chuck, This is a great poem. I'm glad someone thinks that it cool to be old. My father is 84 years old, and the way he complains about his aches and pains. I've begun to regard growing old with terror. If you think it's cool to be old, that must mean you're in good health which I'm very glad to hear! Actually, I'm kind of fearful of growing older. I already have aches and pains, and I'm not looking forward to more! Sincerely, Michael
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barbsdad2003

17 years 11 months ago

Thanx, Michael

Besides growing old, the best thing that's ever happened to me is being diagnosed with diabetes 19 years ago. It got my attention. As a result, given how I've dealt with it, I'm a lot---a lot!---healthier than I'd otherwise be if I hadn't been so diagnosed. No---I mean zero!---aches and pains here. Yours, Chuck
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Chuck...

I'm with you.. if I had to do it all again.. I'd want to start out past being young... enjoyed your write.. Richard
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

On The Fence...

Not old enough to know what old feels like, but seeing my grandparents and other folks startin' to shut down and wear out leaves me with a scared feeling. Hope I die young. ~Jess K. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ~ "The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants." - Thomas Jefferson ~ "Tonight's forcast: dark, continued dark tonight, turning to partly light in the morning..." - George Carlin
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barbsdad2003

17 years 11 months ago

Everyone, I'm Sure, Has ...

a different experience of growing old. Most elder Americans (alas!) are sorry models for later years. Problems generally of aging are many (and can be daunting)---esp. in the United States. We're assaulted on all sides by misinformation(s) of various kinds. And it starts for us from before birth, frankly. But the "problems" I here mention are bendable to a person's will ... if (a major if) one digs for solutions. I keep on digging, which of course is a major contributor to making my life so interesting presently. Since diabetes brings on all sorts of chronic, devastating conditions that aren't pretty, I've had to deal with the whole gamut of health issues. And I mean re cancer, heart disease, kidney failure, early dementia, loss of feet/legs and/or hands/arms, a sudden complete/permanent loss of sight, etc. ad infinitum. I'm fortunate in that dealing with diabetes successfully also deals incredibly successfully with the multitude of fallouts and side effects of typical diabetes, including those above mentioned ... and I've not had even one of those side effects visit me. Author Whitaker early on wrote a book called Reversing Diabetes. I started from there. But I have not finished with that. I've moved on. The ground I travel in this regard is fascinating, with all sorts of twists and wonderful turns. The body is constantly adapting, changing, moving, is anything but static. I respect myself/my body/my diabetes enough to gather info regarding various needs so that I can implement self-treatments that work---in fact, so well that my doctor is dumbfounded by my results. Mine is not the usual experience, but ... it is one that can be borrowed from by others. One of my favorite things during summer months is playing two-man sand volleyball with 20-year-olds, esp. those who are tall. I'm 5-9, so usually at least a 6-3 or 6-4 partner is a must. Either that or at least one exceptionally skilled and a good jumper/spiker at the net. I've developed strategies for such play, strategies that work well enough that my two-man team can win better than 50 percent of the time against a pair on the other side of the net who both are 6-foot-plus and in their early 20s agewise. I'm thankful that "kids" who are nearly 40 years younger than am I appreciate my energetic (and at least somewhat skillful) play. The regret I hear from them is that their couch-potato parents and grandparents consider themselves too old for such frivolity. And of course I give these younger souls a measure of hope that perhaps growing old for them will not be---or does not have to be---the same as it is/was for their own parents/grandparents. Sorry about the apparent bragging. It's unseemly, to use an old-fashioned word. But I here make larger points. In appreciation for your read, your personal sharing, and your commenting, Chuck
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

17 years 11 months ago

Well, Chuck

The poem was great and made me smile. I was even feeling pretty damned good about quickly approaching forty ... then I read your statement here and saw that you'd kick my behind in any physical activity and suddenly I need a nap! Great writing, as usual. Best, Ronda
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barbsdad2003

17 years 11 months ago

You have ...

my sympathetic chuckle over "quickly approaching forty"; and I react thusly due to my experience that each decade arrives ever more quickly than those preceding. As I knock on 70, I know that 90's just around a couple-steps-away corner. And then it's off, I guess, to --- who knows? 150? I'm guessing that at 150, 200 would seem to be a virtual overnight special delivery. What fun, huh? Thanx, Chuck
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

Too right!

I fully admire anyone who is older, but still remains very active. Age is a state of mind, and if you 'act' old, you're gonna be old. My grandfather is in his mid-late 70's and he STILL drives bus! (retired driving truck, now drives bus P/T) It's one of the reasons we get Jai (our cat) running around playing every day. It keeps her young. She's almost 7, yet still has the agility and energy of a kitten. Good on you for deciding not to take your ailments sittin' down! (though if I had a butterfly with a human face near me, I think I'd get my excersize just from running away in fear!) ~Jess K. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ~ "The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants." - Thomas Jefferson ~ "Tonight's forcast: dark, continued dark tonight, turning to partly light in the morning..." - George Carlin
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

Chuck

A great write, Yes it is cool to be [um, er] older in knowledge, just not the body OUCH LOL
Pragyan

Pragyan

17 years 11 months ago

Cool...

I don't knw how it would be when I am old...But thank you for such a great poem...It was way too cool to show it to my Mom and Dad...Because they think that they are getting old...And it always has been disturboing for me the way they take it... Regards Pragyan.