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May 30, 2008
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My present and new hope
My eyes are praying to it's rest but
my mind denies to sleep
It creates fear to face the morning and
the chain problems to face
Lenders and hungry of the following day
threatens me to move away from the bed
There is a little bit of hope among the tears
Convinced me to sleep to face the new day
Saktheee
my mind denies to sleep
It creates fear to face the morning and
the chain problems to face
Lenders and hungry of the following day
threatens me to move away from the bed
There is a little bit of hope among the tears
Convinced me to sleep to face the new day
Saktheee
— SAKTHEEE2007, May 30, 2008
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18 years ago
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