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May 29, 2008
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Humble Beginnings
Senryu:
Humble Beginnings
Chilly board houses
with holes and cracks in the walls
hearth blazing shadows
— Barbara Writes, May 29, 2008
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Just wanted to say hi
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Hi Mark
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Thanks Chrys
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Very Good
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Thanks Peter
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