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Bebop - in the memory of Charles "Bird" Parker

Soft crux of the foyer, sunken
in the wet smoke drained through the stunned lips
of the audience
Young boys became adults … tough stuff,
confirming their value on the stage
From the single spot of light scorching,
Bebop was born like a feral beast,
leaving no gasp for the eyes and the essence
behind darkness;
squeezing their old beliefs in a bottle –
thrown on the sea of oblivion

Waning pirouettes of the hot ladies
were lost in the past time
Old jazzy clothes were forgotten
in the coffin, by the classics

Bebop was running faster
than the noise of a thought

Now, the real masters broke their pianos,
crush their sensations in the trembling legs,
fast rhythms twist their heads like a saxophone
The shaman spirit of Bebop possesses their being
with a drum incantation to the ultimate levels of music

They are the track of a hurricane
on the territory of a silent audience

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Synchro

17 years 11 months ago

An absolutely excellent poem

Standing out here for its brilliance and its insight. I hope I shall be able to see more of your work. Your last two lines are killers. I'd definitely recommend "thrown" for "threw" in S1 Yours in peace, Synchro
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

17 years 11 months ago

thank you

Hi Synchro! I am glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you very much for the feedback - I have made the change, and you were right (I probably missed it) Thank you and you're always welcome! Best regards, Marius
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you

Hi Jess! Thank you very much and I am delighted because you liked it! Marius
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pinksheep

17 years 9 months ago

Loved

2nd stanza-bebop running faster than the noise of thought SUPERB-Last 2 lines collosal, excuse any spelling mistakes BBC English is not my first language Salfordian English is-YOU ARE A GREAT POET MARIUS