my eye? or nose? (senryu)

perhaps your possum has been doused by a skunk...lol smiling ... Richard

a skunk in 'possums clothing? lol. i do, however, detect something malodorous this way cometh;-) loved it!!! Anna

btw if it walks like a duck..talks like a duck, quacks like a duck, what could it be? lol

The banter has been covered, I enjoyed the read, Kindest Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

well done Haiku amusing, either way I would keep it away from Buster Chrys

Smiles:) Barbara I would drop the semicolon and add a comma. I also would drop the dashes and remove the question mark from behind nose making it one sentence. Just some suggestions Title with question marks takes away I think. Is the theme about your eye or nose? or the deceptiveness described in this piece. Great theme.

I agree - I think the possum got into a tassle with the skunk. At least it isn't Buster that's going around stinkin'! Cute write. ~Jess K. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Political Correctness is a doctrine, fostered by a delusional, illogical, liberal minority and rabidly promoted by an unscrupulous mainstream media, which holds forth the proposition that it is entirely possible to pick up a turd by the clean end."

Depends on how close to that possum ya are lol Personally I would rather se a skunk as they are a bit more cute and I would not want to be that close to the possom. It all boils down to where my nose would rather be :) Mark

Well... if ain't pushing up daisies... I'd say it's a good day. lol. Wink. Anna

sorry not to comment sooner, catching up on my reading and laughed my Azz off! great job

but perhaps wiser still to take heed. cheers, Jess