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leonard daranjo
May 31, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

God's Flame

Pencilling its way
Across an indigo sky,
Spider web lacerations,
Paint the earth
Incandescent

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Sean

17 years 11 months ago

Looking out my window I wish

Looking out my window I wish I had your 'God's' flame, not the pail and dreary, opaque haze, that shrouds the earth grey.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 11 months ago

God's Flame

Take no offence here- words were beautiful, but I would add to this, or change it to Haiku, Just my meager opinion~