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Warming The Cabin

This little cabin has been cold a while.
I blame the deep and drifted snow, the hill
and later on the swollen stream - but mostly
lack of purpose, lack of will.

The candle from the scarred and dusty table
a dry match from the tightly lidded jar 
throw light on all the known and friendly places
and shadows where the shadows always are.

Dry kindling from the kindling box...
Split hardwood from the sheltered porch...
Some birch bark unwound from the tight wound roll... 
and then the candle as a torch...

The warming boards and timbers snap and pop
in answer to the crackling in the stove.
Two palms of coffee steaming in the pot
scent shadows softer - though they do not move.

Now for the yellow paper on the bench,
the pens and pencils clustered in their jar,
the circling crows exclaiming each to each
from just above my tight-latched cabin door ...
— Vulgar Peregrine, May 26, 2008

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Rett

Rett

18 years ago

Awakening

The symbolism evokes a lot of memories in me. Am I correct in assuming that you are talking about seclusion and trying to write, but not having much luck? Rett
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Vulgar Peregrine

17 years 12 months ago

I think I’m exploring

I think I'm exploring how I get into the space I write from - the several necessary steps - with the security of familiarity in that space juxtaposed against the unknown that is also there behind the shadows - and with the crows' languid exchanges overhead demonstrating the absolute simplicity of pure communication while their utter blackness and unpredictable gyrations present the imagined and perhaps very real danger implicit in going to some shadowy places, let alone writing from them... The coffee loosens me up. Cowboy Coffee. Couple cups of water, two handfuls of course ground. Boil.
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Jacob

18 years ago

I like this

The metaphor of the cabin invokes in me the journey of my mind, secluded, where I retreat when I feel like it. I love the opening stanza and how we come up with excuses not to write or go to our little place.
VP

Vulgar Peregrine

18 years ago

thank you…

thank you...
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Synchro

17 years 11 months ago

T.S,' "Prufock" is seen in this

And any friend of Eliot is a friend of mine. Yours in peace, (Cynthia McKinney for president) Synchro