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Onions, Movies, I Am and Pickles

1.

Onions

Deftly, the onions remove their skins
one word at a time
understanding the promise of fire
and how they will curl and sizzle
and sometimes burn beyond recognition,
but oh, the smell of frying onions,
always recognizable,
always welcoming as the the first ingredient,
added to just about anything,
ever palatable and edible.

Truth smells like that.

Unless it stings your eyes
or doen't agree with your stomach,
or you worry about bad breath.
Then you pass on the onions.

2.

Movies, I Am And Pickles

In the narrowest conception called "I Am"
lives an unidentified source.
How this source appears is _______________
(By filling in your very own blank.)

I honestly know how exacting and detracting
this monumental task can be, daunting and haunting
remnant variations on a theme, not necessrily on
Paganini, but if you would follow any chronology,
it would seem to me, in the order of circumstances are
invested the earliest recollection of your investment
in the lock stock and barrel, (pickles, however, come free)
of what is most certainly deemed possible, yet highly improbable,
therefore what we have here is a couple of things:

"A failure in communication.", 'What, you can't handle the truth.",
Taken out of context from a few good movies about cool hands
and the gospel of Luke.





— Kailashana, May 25, 2008

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ramanuj

18 years ago

i liked the ease and the

i liked the ease and the style of ur 1st poem. higly intriguing. i dont think i could comprehend the 2nd one, didnt appeal to me.
Kailashana

Kailashana

18 years ago

Thank you for reading

Thank you for reading Ramanuj, the second is a bit meandering, just a stream of thought... and one must be familiar with the movies and certain allegations. (she said grinning) I took the liberty of reading your poem.. will comment on it there. ~Anna
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Rolwright

18 years ago

Hello It's been awhile huh?

Sorry It was something important I had to do , plus for awhile I was locked out of the site.It's like I can see your inner beauty thru your words,which are so provocative.I'm speaking from an unknown vocabulary just to let you know that you are not alone.Actions are always better then words but somethings take time.When you wrote don't ever fall in love with a poet,I felt as though I didn't wan't to even be a poet if I'd hurt you.So if I did I again apologize it seems I've been doing that alot lately.Let's just keep it in perspectus If it's meant to be it will be. Peace, Rolwright
Kailashana

Kailashana

18 years ago

What could you possibly do R

What could you possibly do R to hurt anyone, let alone me? Remember that inane line from that movie: "Love is never having to say you're sorry." Does it mean you don't do anything to be sorry for? or that you say you are sorry for doing something? ~Anna
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Rolwright

18 years ago

Why are you so right

Cause if there was a reason why , you should check out the song From NEYO called Closer Cause it's the best way to explain How I'm feeling Hoope you like it Peace