Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

How Can I Tell...?

How can I tell...
if my life is complete?
Will I have no more turmoil
to knock me off of my feet?
Then will all go as planned?
wouldn't that be so sweet!
If only we could side-step the rain.

How can I tell...
if I've created good friends?
Must I wait for the "means"
to justify the "ends"?
In the grand scheme of things,
'tis we, that picks our favorite trends;
It's unjust to blame all bad things on the rain.

How can I tell...
come time to pay my life's bill,
was my life worthwhile
or was I just charged by each thrill?
Fate's generousity, surprises me still;
'twould be petty to bring up the rain.

Now, I can tell
at the end of the day,
and when all the smoke clears
and life's fog fades away;
a world painted in black and white,
will always have plenty of grey;
I was right, not to blame just the rain.
— docmaverick, May 23, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

More from this author

Critiques

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years ago

This is really good

Smiles:) Barbara I would only suggest that flow is not as smooth. It seems a documentary of questions. Other than that it is good.