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May 23, 2008
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Hated
Senryu: 5|7|5 Hated
Wretched, wicked heart
No one should want, as a friend
Rip it from her chest
Kindness ran away
From her lonely thirsty heart
Trying to feel adore
Blinded by the light
Compassion slips through her hands
Trying to show love
— Barbara Writes, May 23, 2008
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Marius Surleac
18 years ago
nice senryu